Stylistics Metaphors
Stylistics Metaphors
Metaphor Definition
A metaphor (MET-a-for) is an exact comparison between two unrelated things used for dramatic or poetic effect.
This
figure of speech has two parts:
a tenor (the object or concept being described) and
a vehicle (what the object or concept is compared to).
For example, in the sentence “This soup is a masterpiece,” soup is the tenor and masterpiece is the vehicle.
The word metaphor comes from middle French, by way of Latin and Ancient Greek, meaning “a transfer.” Its roots put it close to
metamorphosis, which means “to change,” often in a physical and drastic way.
Examples of Metaphors
“My children are little pigs.” Pigs are typically considered lazy, dirty animals with no self-control. While the children
probably do not root around in mud, the metaphor playfully implies they have some undesirable, piggish qualities.
“A child’s laughter is music.” Music has the power to make people happy and put them at ease. So, though a child’s laughter
may not sound like a cello, it might put you in a good mood the same way your favorite piece of music does.
“She is my rock.” Rocks are solid, heavy, and immovable. They can be used to hold things in place, so calling someone your
rock means they are a dependable person who keeps you grounded.
“A hug from my mom is the supplement that gets me through the week.” A supplement is something you take to stay
healthy and strong, like a multivitamin. While hugs contain no potassium or zinc, they can improve your emotional health.
Common Types of Metaphor
There are many types of metaphors. The kind of effect or comparison a writer wants to make dictates which type they use.
Conventional Metaphor
A conventional metaphor is one people wouldn’t notice in everyday speech because the concept is so common and accepted in our
collective consciousness. For example: “I have to catch up on my sleep.” It is not possible to “catch up on,” or make progress with,
sleep, but most English-speaking American people would instantly understand that the speaker hasn’t been sleeping enough and
intends to sleep more.
Creative Metaphor
Unlike a conventional metaphor, creative metaphors are instantly noticeable as something unique. These metaphors are meant to be
striking and provocative. Consider this stanza from Langston Hughes’s poem “Dreams”:
Implied Metaphor
Implied metaphors make a comparison without explicitly naming the vehicle. In the sentence “She’s got her claws in him,” the
woman in question is being compared to an animal that has claws. However, the metaphor is unspecific about the type of animal,
instead relying on readers’ understanding that the presence of claws implies a type of predator. Thus, the writer would convey that
the woman has captured the man and is in some way more powerful than he is.
Extended Metaphor
An extended metaphor, also known as a conceit, is a comparison that is repeated several times in a work. It can extend several lines
or sentences, or, in the case of many songs or pieces of literature, the entire work. Consider the song “Carry On Wayward Son” by
Kansas:
Catachresis
Catachresis (cat-a-CREASE-iss), also known as a mixed metaphor, is like comparing apples and oranges. It is a blending of two
well-known metaphors or aphorisms in a way that doesn’t make sense. Often, to show that a character is confused, frazzled, or just
not very bright, a writer will have them say a mixed metaphor, like “People in glass houses should not wear their hearts on their
sleeves.” For this reason, it is a common comedic device in stories—and not just in books.
For example, in the “Office Olympics” episode of the workplace sitcom The Office, dim-witted but well-meaning manager Michael
Scott says, “I’m an early bird and I’m a night owl. So I’m wise, and I have worms.” While Scott was clearly trying to say that he is
a man of many strengths, implying there are parasites in his stomach is not something to brag about.
Absolute Metaphor
In an abstract metaphor, the tenor and vehicle cannot be separated cleanly because the concept being expressed is too large or
complex to distill into two distinctly related parts. Think about all the ways “light” is equated with “knowledge” or “truth.” Saying
something “brings light to the situation” implies that it provided understanding without exactly stating that “light” is synonymous
with “understanding.”
A simile uses like or as to show that what would be considered the tenor and vehicle are similar, but not exactly the same:
Analogy: “She’s as crafty as a magician, always pulling solutions out of thin air.”
The Effects of Metaphor
Metaphors help readers better understand unfamiliar concepts or objects, in addition to painting familiar things in a new light. How
easily readers can decipher a metaphor depends on the strength of its comparison.
A strong metaphor is surprising but accessible; it says something new without confusing the reader. Consider how Romeo
describes Juliet in Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet: “But soft, what light through yonder window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is
the sun!” Instead of just saying “Wow, Juliet is beautiful,” the young romantic compares her to the sun to imply her beauty brings
brilliant light and direction into his life.
A weak metaphor, on the other hand, is confusing or alienating because the comparison does not make sense. Consider this
sentence: “The young fighter had a hungry look in his eyes, the kind you get from not eating for a while.” While “a hungry look”
suggests the fighter’s desire to begin the match, the metaphor is weakened by the extension “the kind you get from not eating for a
while.” The sentence could be strengthened by drawing a better comparison, such as “The young fighter looked like a ravenous dog
eyeing a juicy steak.”
Often, weak metaphors are clichés, or overly used phrases that lost their unique, exciting quality. For example, when a character in
a romantic narrative says, “I was falling head over heels in love,” they are comparing their emotions to a sudden fall or trip. While
once an intriguing way to depict the feeling of love, it is now considered a boring cliché. In this instance, a weak, cliched metaphor
is a piece of chewing gum that’s lost all its flavor.
Kambili is a teenage girl living under the repressive but seemingly loving rule of her powerful father in postcolonial Nigeria. Here,
she contemplates the tea her father sometimes shares with her and her brother:
The tea was always too hot, always burned my tongue, and if lunch was something peppery, my raw tongue suffered. But it didn’t
matter, because I knew that when the tea burned my tongue, it burned Papa’s love into me.
Kambili’s father is strict and, at times, abusive, so Kambili compares his love to burning hot tea. While his affection may cause
both metaphorical and physical pain, Kambili nonetheless craves it.
During the Last Supper, two days before he knows he will be killed, Jesus makes an offering to his followers:
While they were eating, Jesus took bread, and when he had given thanks, he broke it and gave it to his disciples, saying, ‘Take it;
this is my body.”
Then he took a cup, and when he had given thanks, he gave it to them, and they all drank from it.
‘This is my blood of the covenant, which is poured out for many,” he said to them. ‘Truly I tell you, I will not drink again from the
fruit of the vine until that day when I drink it new in the kingdom of God.”
Jesus compares his body and, by extension, his impending sacrifice to food and drink—two life-sustaining things. With this
metaphor, he’s telling his followers that, though he’ll no longer be with them in the flesh, his sacrifice will always stay with them
and nourish their souls.
Kafka’s famous novel uses an extended metaphor of a man, Gregor Samsa, turning into a cockroach. The meaning behind the
transformation, though widely debated, remains open. One take is that Gregor feels small and isolated because of what he
considers a life of servitude. In order to help readers understand how Gregor feels, Kafka has him become something most people
would step on. Gregor never looked out for himself, which made him small, insignificant, and something reviled by people—much
like a cockroach. Because of his low self-worth, he is not even surprised when he turns into the insect.
In his affecting and efficient short story, Poe tells the tale of “the red death,” a gruesome fatal disease that terrorizes an unnamed
European country. Prince Prospero summons a large group of his favorite people to live in his fully stocked and guarded abbey,
hoping to avoid contamination. A few months into their seclusion, Prospero holds a grand masquerade, and everyone is startled
when a stranger arrives dressed as the red death. Prospero goes to pull a dagger on this tasteless intruder—only to immediately
drop dead himself. The stranger, it turns out, is Red Death personified.
Poe’s story is akin to a fable—albeit an exceptionally dark one—as its portrayal of an indiscriminate plague is both a metaphor and
a moral. Prospero believes his affluence can save him and his friends, so the red death enters as an uninvited guest to expose
Prospero’s delusion. Despite his best efforts, Prospero cannot save himself from the inevitable simply because of his wealth.