The Pigtail by William Makepeace Thackery
The Pigtail by William Makepeace Thackery
'The Pigtail' by William Makepeace Thackeray is an amusing(humorous )poem. Here, the word
'sage' is used in an ironical sense to refer to a person who is dull-witted.
Theme - How learnt men lack practical common sense.
Special Features –
3rd person narration
Usage of old English - i.e. Sage, muse, yore
Dramatically presented
Starts in past tense at the beginning but ends in simple present tense
The poem starts in a traditional way - 'There lived a sage in the days of yore' (the same
method used in traditional proses, stories etc. - Once upon a time...)
Techniques -
Short phrases
Repetition - 'The pigtail hung behind him' (the meaning of this phrase is repeatedly used
in the last line of each stanza)
Alliteration - 'twist, twirl and tack' (alliteration of 't')
Assonance - 'round and round and out' (assonance of 'o')
Visual imagery - Creates the image of sage's rotation
Hyperbole/exaggeration - Several words such as 'mystery', 'curious case', 'mused' are used
to exaggerate the situation.
Irony
Rhyming pattern - last word of the first three lines of each stanza.
Racy, quick moving rhythm
What makes this poem humorous?
Antics of sage
Usage of mock-serious tone
The absurdity of sage's 'curious case' and his solution
The way the poet organizes his materials and arranges the sentence structures.
i.e. - "There lived a sage in days of yore, And he a handsome pigtail wore;
But wondered much and sorrowed more, Because it hung behind him."
1.Here, from the 1st line, we can imagine a great learnt person because of the use of the
word 'sage' but it is made humorous by the second line of the poem with the word 'pigtail'.
2. The second line is written as 'And he a handsome pigtail wore' instead of 'he wore a
handsome pigtail' to make the word 'yore' in first line rhyme with 'wore' in the second line which
sharply focuses the sage in a frivolous light.
3. The quick transmission from the positive degree adjective 'much' to comparative degree
adjective 'more' in the 3rd line further highlights the folly of sage and sharpens the teasing
quality of the poem.
The words which are used for hyperbole
Repetition -
1) The repetition of the last line of each stanza adds humour to the poem because it always brings
to focus how the pigtail mocks at the sage's efforts by stubbornly remaining behind him.
2) "Then round and round, and out and in,
All day the puzzled sage did spin,
In vain - it mattered not a pin -
The pigtail hung behind him."
Here, we can see that the word 'in' is repeatedly used especially at the end of each line of this
stanza, to give the lines an amusing rhythm which goes very well with the context of the poem
(to show the sage as being engaged in a sort of a gyrating dance to have the pigtail shifted to his
face).
The ending of the poem indicating the readers that the sage didn't stop his rotation although it is
useless ("and though his efforts never slack").
The poet vividly describes the displeasure the sage developed in his mind over the troublesome
pigtail.
“But wondered much and sorrowed more”
“He mused upon his curious case”
“And swore he’d change the pigtail’s place”
The poet also describes the attempt the sage made incessantly to get rid of the pigtail.
“…….he turned him round”
“…….the puzzled sage did spin; in vain….”
“And right, and lift and round about, And up, and down, and in, and out
He turned”
The poet creates a picture of the pigtail using the words, ‘handsome’, ‘this curious case’,
‘hanging’, ‘dangling’. The poet creates much mock, irony and sarcasm towards this character. A
sage is a person who is wise, discreet and judicious, having the wisdom of experience of or
indicating profound wisdom. However the sage in the poem is entirely different. It is the natural
order that a pigtail always falls down behind the head. So, in the whole story the sage is in an
absurd effort to change this position.
However the poet Thackeray presents the concept of the pigtail as a metaphor. It challenges the
wisdom of the sage. It can be taken as an obstacle to prove the intelligence of the sage. The sage
struggles in vain. As the episodes of sages are heard from the East, the poet perhaps reflects on
them in a sarcastic and satirical manner.