Simile and Metaphor
Simile and Metaphor
A simile (pronounced SIM-i-lee) is figurative language that compares two things using the
words “like” or “as.” It is also known as an indirect comparison.
As a writer, similes give you the power to create vivid imagery and descriptions for your
reader.
as thin as a rail.
Then you’re writing in similes. The person you’re writing about does not literally have the
same width as a rail. The comparison between the character and a rail creates a better
image for your reader than saying, “She’s skinny.”
Similes have a simple structure: X is like Y. The comparison uses “like,” “as,” or another
connector. And that’s pretty much it.
What are some examples of similes?
Similes are everywhere: in poems, songs, novels, news reports, everyday conversation,
and any writing or speech using a creative comparison that involves the words like or as.
• There were rockets like a flight of scintillating birds singing with sweet voices.
(J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring)
You may kill me with your hatefulness, But still, like air, I’ll rise. (Maya Angelou,
“Still I Rise”)
• The man moved with exquisite calm, like a leaf drifting on the surface of a pond,
making its own way on gentle currents. (Colson Whitehead, The Underground
Railroad)
• You are like a hurricane/There’s calm in your eye (Neil Young, “Hurricane”)
• Then she looks up at us with a scowl, like we’re keeping something from her,
like we’re evil stepmothers keeping her rightful crown under lock and key.
(Celeste Ng, “Girls, at Play”)
• Your love is like a rollercoaster (Ohio Players, “Love Rollercoaster”)
• So you have no frame of reference here, Donny. You’re like a child who
wanders into the middle of a movie …. (Walter Sobchak, The Big Lebowski)
What is a metaphor?
A metaphor is a direct comparison between two things. Metaphors don’t suggest one thing
is like another; they declare that one thing is another: Love is a battlefield. He is the black
sheep of the family. You are my lucky star.
Metaphors are abundant in our language, and often you won’t even know you’re using
them.
You’ve replied using a metaphor. Their request has the same clarity as a transparent
crystal.
Similes and metaphors use language to achieve the same thing: Create a description by
using comparison. There are even some instances in which similes and metaphors are
interchangeable. To return to the father-daughter example, you could say they are like two
peas in a pod (simile) or they are two peas in a pod (metaphor). The message is the same
in both instances.