Lesson 4: Epic The African Epic Genre
Lesson 4: Epic The African Epic Genre
FAULTY: Four times, Wagadu stood there in all her splendor, and four
times she disappears and is lost to human sight.
PARALLEL: Four times, Wagadu stood there in all her splendor, and four times she
disappeared and was lost to human sight.
Avoid shifting from active to passive voice.
Examples:
FAULTY: After the battle, Gassire left and the spears were
gathered by the knights.
PARALLEL: After the battle, Gassire left and the knights gathered the spears.
Avoid shifting the mood or the manner in which a thought of a sentence is expressed.
Examples:
FAULTY: Gassire said “Gather the spears and you can now go.”
Example:
FAULTY: Gassire said “Gather the spears and
you can now go.”